Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 1 May 2020
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Well done Kate. Your writing looks lovely and neat. What kind of food did they hunt for?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the excellent work.
Great handwriting Katelyn, it looks like you have worked really hard on this. What are you goals to focus on in handwriting?
ReplyDeleteHey Kate its me Mayah from room 3 and this is very cool writing and its very clear how much hours or mins did i take you?
ReplyDeleteHello Katelyn its Aimee from New Brighton Catholic school, I wanted to comment on your blog because the pictures are really cool, But next time it would be better if you could add a Walt, question and a reflection about how you felt.
ReplyDeleteHow long did the story take you?