Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 2 June 2020

The Evil Shoemaker

WALT: analyse and create a character description.


This is the story of The Evil Shoemaker let me tell you about him... He is fancy, tall and looks evil. He is a businessman, he wears
a tux and a top hat.


 He has no friend and he lives in Paris. He is sneaky, scary and creepy.


He steals customers and he likes money.He has curly red hair.


The Evil Shoemaker is a shoemaker and a shoemaker makes shoes.


That's the end of The Evil Shoemaker.  👞 👠👡👢




Wednesday, 11 December 2019

Tuatara


We are learning to write an explanation about life cycles.  We got a fact sheet about pandas, frogs and tuatara. An explanation needs Technical language, subtitles, titles, introduction, stages and factual information 


What went well for me was using technical language . My next step is more detail.  


How many eyes does a tuatara hatchling have? 













Tuatara 

I am going to tell you about the life cycle of a tuatara 

Egg Stage 


Female tuatara was like 10 to 19 eggs in a deep burrow underground.
That is a soft and leathery.

Hatching Stage 

Hatchlings have three eyes.
 Hatchling are about 12 to 15 cm long.





Juvenile Stage 


Juvenile tuataras grow scales over their third eye. 
Juvenile tuataras do not have babies 


Adult stage 


Adult tuatara sleep during the day and hunt at night.
Adult tuatara are about 45 to 60 cm long








    




Wednesday, 18 September 2019

How to draw a flower.


we are learning to write instructions.
you need to have tile, instructions and a goal

How To Draw a flower

Goal: To draw a flower

What you need pen and paper.

  1. First you get pens and paper.
  2. Next you draw a little circle on the paper.
  3. Next you draw 5 petals on the paper going around the circle.
  4. Next you draw a vertical line down from the circle.
  5. Next you finally draw leaves on the vertical line. 

Thursday, 29 August 2019

The Great Escape

We are learning to write a narrative, a narrative is a kind of story it has a title and a problem and solution. I like writing the story I dislike writing it on the Chromebook because its harder to write. nest time I`m going to put more punctuation. what would you write about?



Thursday, 28 March 2019

Welcome to my Blog







Haere Mai, Talofa Lava, Mālō e Lelei , Maligayang Pagdating and welcome to my very own blog for learning. I look forward to sharing my learning with teachers, my school, my family and friends anywhere.