Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 18 June 2020
My creations
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Pita, and I came past your blog post of the Kiwi and the fantail (piwakawaka), it is awesome. The drawing you made reminds me of when my cousin and I when went into his Backyard which was more like a jungle and we saw the New Zealand birds which were the pukeko, takahe, tui and fantail. I really loved the drawing you made! Next time please check your punctuation But I still like the drawing, Ka pai! keep the work up!
Bye!
Hello katelyn,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mina I come from HayPark School I am a year 5,
I find your work creative Its amazing
I was wondering if the kiwi and the fantail have a name?
maybe next time you could tell us somethings about the kiwi and the fantail.
Hi Katelyn im Olivia from Rawhiti school. I really like the pictures of the fantail and kiwi that you have drawn. It reminds me of when I went to the zoo. Maybe you can add more writing.
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