W.A.L.T Write a persuasive letter
Blue crayon here. I am tired of being your favorite Crayon! Katelyn G! because I am Very Very Very Overworked! Also... try not to draw the Sky all
the time... it's so much work. I am not happy... I am Mad!
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Lovely work Katelyn. You can tell that the blue crayon is not happy at all. Excellent ideas. Miss Pownall.
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